The Thursday Post Critiques 1.8.13

thursday post critiques



Never ever trust the editor blindly- the man or the machine, both can make mistake.


Baby pink

Her favourite color is baby pink, one look into that sweet face and a man is her slave. They serve her, the goddess of innocence and beauty, lavishing them with everything they want, dream and desire plus more.

They never even guess that her physical beauty was god-given weapon but the perfect disguise of innocence was an acquired skill.

She fooled and used men and when they woke up she feigned to be the victim and fooled by her perfect disguise hundreds swore of her purity and innocence.

By the time she was thirty she was a billionaire and the contributors of her wealth were either dead or bankrupt.

Word Count 109 words


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