The Thursday Post Critiques 31.10.13




“Cuff him!” the officer told the constable and turned away, without looking at him for the second time.

“I swear that shark had hands and legs…” the young man screamed while being shoved in the jeep.

Few kilometers away, deep under the ocean:

“Sharkboy has escaped again!” Mr. Pereira glared at his junior, “How many times will I have to say that he is as intelligent as human beings and you will have to keep him locked up like a murderer who loves to kill?”

“How can he …” his junior mumbled sheepishly.

“Go and get him, if you don’t when the colonel shows up you will answer him about disappearance of his multi million project!”


Well, this is this week’s flash fiction! Have fun!


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