The thursday post critiques 17.7.14

A cigarette and a peg of whisky. That was how he loved his evenings.

Away from commitments.

Then age got the better hand, life started to feel bleak. The problem was, he was not a rich old man looking for a pretty young lass.

He was a middle-class old man, with a beer belly and dark patches under his eyes, looking for a pretty young lass.

No one was interested.

the thursday post critiques

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4 thoughts on “The thursday post critiques 17.7.14

  1. thanks for making me really happy! i so wish that some publishers will see that spark of talent and my dream will come true hee ha ha 🙂

    thanks for the morale boosting. that means a lot!

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