The Thursday Post Critiques 8.1.15

the thursday post critiques

He has called his boss, telling him about the condition, his request for delay was blown off as usual. “Excuses don’t work at your desk… be there on time!”

He watched the man in front of him, another hapless creature walking cautiously, holding his briefcase in his hand. They were barely a few inches apart from each other, or else that cursed mist would have swallowed him too!

They were midway in the bridge when all of a sudden another sun popped up right beside the one already shining, they both saw two sets of huge, razor like teeth as big as themselves… “Gotcha!” a thunderous roar was followed by a slurping sound… the bridge was empty waiting for next clerk

This is from an illustrated book of micro stories, the illustrations are done by the humblle author herself, the paintings from the books-well let them stay mystery, but enjoy the story.

Tell me a story

ISBN-13: 978-1502955388 (CreateSpace-Assigned)
ISBN-10: 1502955385
BISAC: Fiction / General


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