The Thursday Post Critiques 22.1.15

the thursday post critiques

His heart missed a beat when she whispered huskily, “Ask me to dance!” She was the head turner of the ball room, draped in red gown with a crown on her head, her skin was smooth as silk, her face was covered with a mask but he could see a really beautiful face hidden behind that mask. They danced under the chandelier making her look even more seductive- dance after dance till they both got exhausted and slipped out to the verandah. “Show me your lovely face dear!” she opened her mask after much cajoling and begging and exposed a hideous old crone. He got up and left the place in a hurry. She giggled like a teenager. She loved breaking hearts.

This is from an illustrated book of micro stories, the illustrations are done by the humblle author herself, the paintings from the books-well let them stay mystery, but enjoy the story.

Tell me a story

ISBN-13: 978-1502955388 (CreateSpace-Assigned)
ISBN-10: 1502955385
BISAC: Fiction / General


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